Writing Samples

Every Picture tells a story.

Use your imagination and experience to narrate (tell) a story about the photo.

Where are the people going? Why?

What problem is caused?  How is it solved?

Think about:

• where your story is set
• who your character are - what they do, what they say, and how they think and feel
• the problem and how it is solved
• the order of your ideas and how they are linked.

Remember to:

• choose your words carefully
• take care with your spelling, punctuation, and sentences
• edit - add or delete words or sentences to improve your work.

One foggy afternoon me and my two best friends, Lesieli and Ngatokurua went to a the nearest river in town to have nice and calming swim, then suddenly we saw a young lady. She was wearing a navy coloured sailing suit and hat with straight blond hair and we walked up to him and he grab us by a fright and took us in his sailing boat that runs on rails it was a odd sight to see and then I saw Ngatokurua setting next to the sail his name was sailer Dannis she said that it was her sister and that she want to take us on the never ending train track and we were all scared besides from Ngatokurua she was happy that her sister was there by her side.

A few hours later Lesieli got a big shot, me and Ngatokurua were playing hand games while Dennis was steering the wheel of the boat and then Dennis told us to close your eyes and imagine that we were somewhere happy and I imagine being in a world of milk and cookies with soft marshmallows we were sailing across the worm chocolate milk and there were chocolate fishes and a volcano that exploded with Bright orange ice-cream and there would be different coloured animals that would have jelly beans inside them.

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I wake up and I have drill down the side of my shirt that I was wearing then we came to a stop it  it was the starting line of this adventure we jumped out and we rans as fast as we could back home with scratches on our knees and saw your parents on the table having tea with a smile.